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(A) 5/11 DO NOW: Revise "wordy" sentences
 * 1) In the cellar there are four wooden-type crates with nothing in them that might perhaps be used by us for storing paint cans inside of.
 * 2) This morning at 6:30 a.m., I woke up out of sleep to hear my alarm go off, but the alarm was turned off by me, and I returned back to a sleeping state.
 * 3) The reason that Merdine was not able to be in attendance at the hockey game was because she had jury duty.
 * 4) Omar and I, we returned back to the hometown where we both grew up to attend a reunion of the people that we went to high school with ten years ago in the past.

CLASSWORK: Revise commencement speeches based on peer feedback. Present "chunks" of speeches for full-class feedback.

Homework:
 * REVISED SPEECH DUE IN DRIVE by 7:50AM on Wednesday!**

(A)5/13 DO NOW: Revise "wordy" sentences AND annotate them for delivery.
 * 1) Melba has designed a very unique kind of shirt that is made out of a polyester type of material that never creases into wrinkles when it rains and the shirt gets wet.
 * 2) She used her money to purchase a large-type desk made of mahogany wood that is dark brown in color and handsome to look at.
 * 3) In view of the fact that it was raining down, orders were given that the game be canceled.
 * 4) At that point in time when Marie was a teenager the basic fundamentals of how to dance were first learned by her.

CLASSWORK: Review Annotation tools for public speaking. Annotate a chunk your speech with **3 different variations.** Present said chunk of speech for peer feedback.

Homework:
 * REVISED SPEECH DUE IN DRIVE by 7:50AM on Wednesday!**

(A) 5/15 Continue presenting for feedback.
 * SENIORS PRESENT NEXT WEEK!**